根据提示和图片写短文。（12分）
提示：
根据所给图示，以“Wang Lei's Busy Day”为题，写一篇50词的短文，内容必须符合图意，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。（正文第一句已给出）
Wang Lei's Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday．__________________________
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（2001南京市中考题）
考生作文：
Wang Lei's Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday．It was Women' 失分点① Day．Wang Lei went to shop to buy something失分点②．He buyed失分点③ a lot of things．After he came back to home失分点④，he cleaned the room and do the housework．When Wang Lei's mother came back，she saw 失分点⑤his son cooked 失分点⑥a lot of delicious food．His mother said to him，“You are a good boy．You're GREat！”
①Women'改为Women's不以s结尾的复数名词的所有格仍加“'s”。
②宜用do some shopping表示购物。
③buyed改为bought。
④home是副词，其前不加介词，故去掉介词to。
⑤根据上下文，此处saw宜改为found。
⑥cooked改为had cooked此处表示动作在过去已完成，应用过去完成时。（南京市一考生）
简评：
本文满分12分，该文章得8分，作者基本能按图意和提示，写出意思通顺，行文连贯的短文，但语言表达错误不少，出现了6个失分点。
参考范文：
Wang Lei's Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday，and it was Women's Day．Wang Lei went to shop to do some shopping．He bought a lot of things．After he came back home，he cleaned the room and do the housework．When Wang Lei's mother came back，she found her son had cooked a lot of delicious food．His mother said to him，“You are a good boy．You are GREat！”
