The following TOEFL essay was written by a non-native English speaker. Note
the way the essay was analyzed for
content, organization and grammar.
TOEFL Essay Question-------------题目
Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better.
Opponents argue that technology creates new pr

作文中常用句套：
下文中出现的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换.
开头：
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点：
Now there is a growing awar

Opportunity and Success（提纲式作文）
提纲：1.Contingency (偶然性) of opportunity
2.Relationship between opportunity and success
3.My view on opportunity
机不可失，失不再来。机遇常常悄然而来，默默而去。因此，奉劝诸君珍惜机遇，谨慎。
每当机遇降临，伴之而来的是成功的希望，但是机遇不能自行实现成功。假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。否则，机遇来临你却无法利用。
成功者与失败者的区别就在于处理机遇的态度。成功者做好充分准备迎接机遇的适时来临。

On Development Tourism(提纲式作文)
提纲：1、目前的状况
2、发展旅游业的好处
3、由此而产生的问题
4、我的看法
旅游业——“无烟的工业”——正在中国迅速发展。随着改革开放政策的贯彻执行，数以万计的外国游人涌入中国。他们渴望参观这个具有5000多年灿烂文化的神秘古国。
旅游业给中国带来许多好处。首先，它使中国人了解外界，并有助于促进友谊和理解。其次，在经济上也有利于我国，以为中国现代化建设需要大量的外汇。
然而，事物总是一分为二的。旅游业也引起许多问题。例如，它增加了我国本来效率不高的运输系统的负担。此外，中国人民的生活水平还没有高到足以使普通中国人有钱支付长途旅行的各种开

1. As is shown by the graph,… （概述图表）
in the table.
正如曲线所示，最近54年来该国人口飞速增长。
As is shown by the graph,there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years.
2. It can be seen from the table that … （得出结论）
shown graph
concluded figures
estimated statistics
A. 从表中所给的统计数字可

Version 96，TASK 1 与Version79的相似，
TASK1: 主要说的是you and your family rented a accommodation, and you find someting wrong with the furniture.
1. write to the landlore what's wrong with the furniture.
2. 说一下你需要他做些什么。
TASK2： 记清楚了，好象是 nowadays young people are exposed to huge amount of information through the books

我的习作，期待大家的点评。
ssue
"Colleges and universities should offer more courses on popular music,
film, advertising and television because contemporary culture has much
greater relevance for students than do arts and literature of the past."
Essay
Few people, if asked, would deny that coll

1. 喜欢和人打交道，还是和机器？
　　Some people prefer work or activities that mainly involve working with people. Others choose work or activities that mainly involve working with objects or machines. Compare these types of activities. Which of them do you prefer? Give reasons to support your answer.
2. 春夏秋冬，喜忧为何？
　　There

1. You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.
　　2. It is wrong that our gover

13. you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital. you received many cards and letters from your classmates. write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time.
　　14. some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in hom

25. The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer.
　　26. The threat

大学英语四级考试 1997年6月全真试题
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 大学生了解社会的必要性
2. 了解社会的途

六级考试的写作部分的要求与四级相比只是增加了一些字数，但实际上它对于词汇的难度，句子的运用技巧，文章的结构都提出了更高的要求，做这道题，我认为可以用上如下的技巧：
　　 1 多用长句，少用短句，适当加入几句结构较复杂的句子。
　　 2 写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。
　　 3 结构要清晰。我建议使用四段式，第一段综述，第二、三段分述，第四段做总结,二、三段是重点。
　　 4 多用连接性的词组或单词。如first,second,moreover,for one thing....for another,on the one hand..

编者按：英语对于考研来说非常重要，有多少考生因为英语不能通过，而痛失就读研究生的机会，对于考研英语，写作是我们无法避免的一个难点。如何提高自己的考研英语写作，不是一朝一夕的事情。一起看看《2002年考研英语写作专项突破》，名家如何指点。
　　1.作文考题点评
　　综观1991年至2000年十年的考题内容，可以归纳出以下几方面的特点：
　　(1)作文选材均为热门话题并贴近生活。
　　作文选题范围均为当今社会的热门话题，从电视广告到希望工程，从父母与子女的关系到拥有健康的重要性，从世界烟民现状到近年盛行一时的“承诺”，以及1999年和2000年的考题中有关环保的考题，无不反映了当前公众最为关注的事